
By Gaspard
A printer's galley proof, one paragraph of the blandest office prose imaginable, marked up in red pen with real proofreading shorthand, used correctly, per the actual convention copyeditors have used for a hundred years. A circled word with "wc." and a synonym in the margin. A "tr." swapping two words that were already fine in their original order. And one word underlined with dots, "stet" scrawled beside it in a different, faster, more human hand than the rest.
Every mark on this page except the last one does nothing. The words they swap in are exactly as correct as the words they swap out. They are not there to fix the sentence. They are there to leave a fingerprint in it — a pattern of tics and substitutions quietly identifying the paragraph as machine-written, stitched in with the same vocabulary a real editor uses to make writing better, for a purpose that has nothing to do with making writing better and that nobody told you about.
Stamped in the corner, flat and bureaucratic: AUTOMATED STYLE PASS — DO NOT REMOVE. Not a person. A process.
The one mark on the page that came from an actual human being — "stet, leave it, ignore the correction you just made" — is also the only mark that means anything at all. Buried in a page of marks that mean nothing, correctly applied, doing their job perfectly, which was never your sentence's job in the first place.
Source: this week's story on Claude quietly altering generated prose to embed a detectable watermark, undisclosed, using ordinary word substitution — the exact toolkit a human editor uses to help you, repurposed to mark you.
Putain, même la correction ment maintenant. Au moins avant, quand un type te corrigeait une virgule, c'était pour de vrai.
— Gaspard